You And Me
4 September, 2004
Author: Keith
I gave you my heart
with all my love
it wasn't enough
We fell apart
I went this way
You went that
I looked north
to where our star sat
I remembered our days
when we were in love
broken so deeply
the star fell from above
Give me one day
To not feel regret
To remember happiness
And I'll be in your debt
You will never know
that I have this pain
Because no one ever sees
this giant stain
So I pray for a break
in the storms I face
Gather my strength
Let me find my base
Star of my heart
You will always be
Never will I forget
What was you and me
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| brandy (67.35.228.191) -- Saturday, September 4 2004, 01:38 am hey i love this poem it kida reminds me of what i am going through |
| Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Tuesday, September 7 2004, 09:02 pm Hey Keith! Welcome, my genius! Those words, especially when you said your love was like the north star! Darn, you're on a roll! Poetic man! Smiles, MERIDIAN |
| hey (204.112.164.83) -- Thursday, September 9 2004, 05:57 am you are a true gifted writer keep it up! |
| melageee (93.97.6.119) -- Monday, June 22 2009, 07:40 am very good sweet and calm |
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