Sobbing On The Floor by Leah06

Why do you have to play me?
Pretend that im your dream
Lead me on and lie to me
You are not what you seem.
I thought that you loved me
And I thought I loved you too
But now you want to end it
I dont know what to say to you.
You lied to me and cheated me
Ive never felt so bad before
You tore my heart into little pices
And now im sobbing on the floor.
Whats even worse than what youve done to me
Is that I still want you
Even after all the pain you caused
I still love you too.

Leah06 (24.7.31.81) -- Sunday, September 12 2004, 10:35 pm

...
wow, this type of feeling sucks. i kinda wrote this out of instinct. thats what happens with me, I go through something good or bad and i just end up writing it down. i shouldnt have submitted this one. i dont know why i did...

Terrie* (65.148.213.216) -- Sunday, September 12 2004, 11:55 pm

Leah06, excellent expression...
a lot of effort and meaning were put into this....sweetie, when we write on emotions whether our own or of someone else, they have great meaning..never put anything that you write from the heart down..i'm sure others can relate to this feeling that you have expressed..as usual your material is unique..do not ever surpass a thought..if you did you would deny your heart to express it's inside thoughts...

Leah06 (206.110.20.2) -- Wednesday, September 22 2004, 08:29 pm

terrie*
Thank you for your wisdom, it is needed at this point in time. Im glad you liked my poem!

COPYRIGHT NOTICE: All Rights Reserved. No part of this website, including all pictures and written words, may be reproduced or copied in any manner from this website without permission of the original author of the work. All poetry and pictures herein remain the sole property of the original author and/or copyright owner. All poetry on this website has been submitted by the original author of the work. To contact any author of the work please e-mail: dreamer@dreamersreality.com so the proper person may be notified.