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Raindrops Of Love
15 September, 2004
Author: Leah06

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My body begins to tingle
A smile wipes across my face
I feel my cheeks get hot
My mind is off in space.
I open the small box
And let my eyes fly
My heart beats even faster
Time seems to inch by.
My spirit begins to sink
My body starts to shake
Tears wall my eyes
My chest begins to ache.
The damn begins to crumble
My smile drowns in tears
My head begins to spin
Heart beat pounding in my ears.
I feel so empty
Love has brought me here
Everything goes blank
And I tremble alone in fear.
I found that where their is love
Their is also pain
It can be painful like a storm
And as beautiful as the rain.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Megan (205.188.116.130) -- Wednesday, September 15 2004, 08:41 pm

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Your exactly right. Love is love. & I love the ending to your poem "I found where there is love, there is also pain. It can be painful like a storm, and as beautiful as the rain".
:) -Meg-
stacey (69.137.26.123) -- Wednesday, September 15 2004, 08:54 pm

i really liked this one

nice writting leah !!
Terrie* (65.148.231.159) -- Wednesday, September 15 2004, 10:50 pm

Leah06, delicately put......, love ' N pain.....

always a storm before a rainbow...there's always gonna be pain to balance the emotions.......beautiful...absolutely beautiful...
Leah06 (206.110.20.2) -- Wednesday, September 22 2004, 08:27 pm

meg, stacey, and terrie

Im glad you all liked it. This is how i felt a few days ago when i thought i lost controll of my life and my heart. I hope in reading my poem, you will all realize that it doesnt take a guy in your life or love for him in your heart to be happy. Thanks for commenting.

~Leah Kendall
 
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