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Dad
14 November, 2003
Author: Brittany Walker

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I am daring.
I am bold.
I will not do what i am told.
Im a dreamer.
Im a queen.
Im everything in between.
I live without boundries.
I cry secret tears.
I cant you see my biggest fears.
Im becoming of age.
Iv barely started.
Im a girl standing where the roads have parted.
Im smart but confused.
Im week but im strong.
Ill make my own decisions no matter how wrong.
Im tempted.
My heart aches.
But these are decisions
that i must make.
I know that you are scared
of what i will find.
on this journey through dangerous times.
But you must understand
dad
we will break free from each other.
and go our own way.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

blondie (66.2.148.188) -- Saturday, November 15 2003, 07:32 pm

i can relate

i think this poem is good becuz i can relate to it alot it makes so much sense 2 me k bye
Cassie Longhurst (81.105.176.2) -- Saturday, November 15 2003, 10:35 pm

aaawwwww

awww that is so sweet
KitKatrina (68.113.60.103) -- Thursday, November 20 2003, 09:06 am

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I liked your poem, it flowed real well. I love how whatever you have to say can just be put into a poem and come out beautifully, ya know? Good job ~Trina
Ashley R (64.66.199.39) -- Sunday, December 14 2003, 11:34 pm

Brittany

Hey Brittany, this is Ashley. I see that dreamer let you opst some poems. I like this one. Good Job!
 
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