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19 September, 2004
Author: LinzAy

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When my hand is held in yours the whole world is locked out. It's just you and I. And that feeling intesifies so much when all of me is held in your arms...everything is locked out for that moment. For that moment, I breathe and it's only you I breathe in. All the comfort, safety, warmth, love, all the completeness I feel with you soaks into my heart, then into all of me. Which may explain why I excessively feel the need to be held by you.

When I look at you and tell you how cute you are, how gorgeous you are - it's because I think just that. It's what I truly see. Everything I want, everything I need. I'm lucky enough to be able to see that everyday...to see you.

When our lips cover eachother every thought about anything other than you is lost. I close my eyes and let those moments consume me. I love touching your lips and thinking about how they feel on mine. How they make me feel as though I'm lost in not only me but also you.

And when I hear you tell me you love me there's nothing else I could ever want to hear. No place else I could ever want to be in that moment of love......it feels as though some form of Heaven shines through in everything and I'm complete. Completed by you.

I Love You.

------- Author's Notes -------

Written for my Jeff.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

everett (209.240.207.43) -- Tuesday, September 21 2004, 06:32 am

hey

wow this is such a good poem. Im so happy that you found someone that makes you happy. great poem :)
LinzAy (4.27.181.62) -- Wednesday, September 22 2004, 12:29 am

ev ...

Thanks:) And thanks for bein happy for me :) and then thanks again :)
 
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