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Frostbite Of The Heart
19 September, 2004
Author: LinzAy

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Hold my eyes closed
Shut my eyes
Break my heart
Erase my mind

My fingertips are numb
And it's the future of all of me
Due to frostbite of the heart
From what will never be

Searched everywhere for you
But you hid so well
Stumbled on one shadow and another
Broken I fell
Relationship death by homicide
You killed it all
Thought you held my heart so close
But now it's splattered all over this brick wall

My fingertips are numb
And it's the future of all of me
Due to frostbite of the heart
From what will never be
Covered up in dust
From the ashes of a burned up dream
Frostbite of the heart
Look at everything you've done to me

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Comments on this poem/writing:

everett (209.240.207.43) -- Tuesday, September 21 2004, 06:29 am

nice

Hey Linz, great Poem. It reminds me of a kick ass song. good stuff.
LinzAy (4.27.181.62) -- Wednesday, September 22 2004, 12:30 am

kick ass song...

Thanks :P

what song does it remind u of?
everett (209.240.207.43) -- Wednesday, September 22 2004, 06:24 pm

reminds me of...

this song called Twenty Below by Hidden In Plain View. there is a line where he says "Frostbite on my heart..." good stuff.
 
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