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Inlove With You
25 September, 2004
Author: Heath A May

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inlove with you and you with me .
only creates a world of harmony,
my love for you runs ever so strong.
i prayed for you for a time so long. .

ive got you now and happy i am .
i wont let go cause im your man


so baby please here me though .
i have selected these words for you .

the words are true, believe me baby . i do love you

------- Author's Notes -------

for my tru love christina

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (198.81.26.42) -- Monday, September 27 2004, 05:09 am

......

That's so sweet :)
rebecca whyke (10.60.4.156) -- Wednesday, May 21 2008, 02:21 pm

Inlove With You!

this is a quite a good poem
but it needs to be a little more unique
with more description in the poem .. writeback xo.
barb (67.58.197.169) -- Saturday, May 24 2008, 10:30 pm

my kind of writing

I really liked this stating the truth and understandable for the reader.good going
 
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