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A Compassionate Heart..
27 September, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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her words capture your honesty
she keeps your life decent
she speaks with such modesty
her heart knows and repeats no lie
she refuses to let life bring her down and cry
she appears strong with her words but we know
she is a delicate rose
we respect her for the opinions she shares
because she allows us to share our own
we know she truely cares
if hugs were words on the web
you can consider your self hugged
by her every word spoken
and by the wisdom she inspires
I know her not in the flesh
but I've gotten to know her
Through her compassionate heart..

------- Author's Notes -------

Barb, this is for you DOLL.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (209.112.24.193) -- Sunday, September 26 2004, 11:02 pm

aweeee

Thank-you terrie what a beautiful writing about ME HA gave me a lump in my throat.
Terrie* (65.54.98.30) -- Sunday, September 26 2004, 11:40 pm

Barb, no thanx needed Doll..

i know how you enjoy short poetry...read between the lines..it all adds up the same long or short.....may all of your tomorrows start out pleasant and become very memorable for years to come as you continue to share your gift of friendship w/others.. God Bless.....HUGS/LOVE
Martin Vann (67.234.27.23) -- Monday, September 27 2004, 09:41 pm

A Loving Heart, With Guarded Passion

She need, the touch, of passion. with out it, her heart, has no reason to beat. Yet, she will not be abused, give her love, are go back, to your bed-room drames, this is not, waht this lady is looking for. As a matter of fact, she has waited, and searched with out touching, for so long, her hear has become, a chamber, of passion and wisdom. What man is ther among us, who can win her body, much less, her soul, no, not me! She knows more about love than my last, Saturday night, this woman, is above. If, I could be born again, and I hear frome the words of God, I have a chance, if, I change my ways. Then I wonder, will this angel's wings, fold, around my heart and if, she did, could I survive, such love.

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joyce ivy (68.19.189.189) -- Tuesday, September 28 2004, 07:13 pm

very sweet terrie

that was very sweet poem for your friend...and i also see a big heart in both of you through your poetry.. i do read all you both write just don't have alot of time to comment...but i do enjoy all of them you both write.. it is great to see people with hearts as big as you 2 have....joyce
 
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