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Every One Of You
28 September, 2004
Author: Shan

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I wonder about the people that I find, about those who have found me,
Who has been here for the climb and who has kept me on my feet
Who I've watched out for over time, and those I've let slip and fall
I wonder about everyone around me, would they be there if I call
I ponder on thoughts about me, and how I've been to you
How would your life have been without me, would've it have been easier on you
What do I mean to your expression, am I just a passing face
Is this one of life's peculiar testings, who will put me in my place
Will you still be here tomorrow, will you still be in my thoughts
Can I hold you through your sorrow, how long will our roads cross
Have I heard all of your confessions, have I told you all of mine
You all have taught me a lesson, that my words can't define
Do you know what you mean to me, do I mean as much to you,
What can I say to make you see how much you've helped me through
Each of you have taught me a lesson, each one of you ---- has made me, me

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Comments on this poem/writing:

joyce ivy (68.19.189.189) -- Tuesday, September 28 2004, 06:47 pm

good point

very good shan..everyone we meet, be it in life or on the net...touches our live in one way or another...and i often wonder myself..how i may have touched someone elses life if by nothing but a kind word..a comment...or just a smile...you never really know...i know in life and on the net so many people have touched my life and made me see alot of things different than i use use...great job...joyce
Terrie* (65.148.232.232) -- Tuesday, September 28 2004, 08:50 pm

Shan, provoking thought...

i love your work, your a true poetic artist..when you have a chance read "whose life was touched today" one of many answers to: what do i mean to your expression, am i just a passing face?...thank you for touching my life by feeling your words of appreciation...Hugs/Love
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