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Guess What?
29 September, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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mommy and I went to the park the uderday
we both saw a puppy hard at play
I wish I had a puppy like dat
a buddy I could pat
mommy, I want a puppy so bad
she said let's ask your dad
daddy, I feel so alone
can I have a puppy of my own?

just in case ...
I made a very sad face

he said we will see what I can do
guess what ?
I got a puppy and a baby bruder too..

------- Author's Notes -------

i was inspired to share my childrens poetry by an Angel child . my friend Amy

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Amy (82.35.77.233) -- Monday, October 4 2004, 05:11 pm

My Friend Miss Terrie

oh wow miss terrie. this is sooooooooooo cool. i really do want a puppy. i think i will read this one to daddy. he'll like it
Terrie* (65.148.208.85) -- Monday, October 4 2004, 11:53 pm

Amy, little darlin'..

i'm happy to hear that you liked this..
i have been digging deep into my journal and pick out ones suitable for children to understand and appreciate..besides it brings me fond memories of my childrens childhood..i hope your daddy likes it too..HUGS/LOVE
Amy (82.35.77.233) -- Tuesday, October 5 2004, 05:13 pm

Miss Terrie

i wish that all the grown ups wrote like you do. its easier for me and if they did then i think more kids will come and read the poems.
Terrie* (65.135.87.171) -- Tuesday, October 5 2004, 08:24 pm

Amy, sweetie maybe....

after reading your comment..many of us grown ups will tackle childrens poetry..we all love reminiscing our childrens childhood as well as our very own..good thought princess....let's see where it goes HUGS/LOVE for you always ..MIss T
 
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