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Young I'll Be Forever In Mind
30 September, 2004
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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At this moment in life,
Everyone seems younger than me,
I sit in class hoping to pass,
Looking around its happens again,
I’d like to know who said I’m old,
Other students are younger than me,
Even the professor is not as old as me,
This morning I woke,
I was young so full of life,
This morning I woke,
None of these pains were present in me,
I’d like to know who said I’m old,
Even though now I feel more mature,
Time passes more quickly than it did before,
I’m sure I must sleep some months away,
My back now aches almost every day,
Funny but I don’t remember it ever this way,
Christmas is almost here I see,
Wasn’t it only just here I say,
I’d like to know who said I’m old,
Time unfolds in a mysterious way,
Seems I forget more than I knew yesterday,
I’ll plod along young or old,
Tomorrow will replace the aches of today
Young I'll be forever in my mind.

------- Author's Notes -------

As we leave for others the words of youth,
We are reminded it was there we once were,
I'm young today even if my body at times
reminds me I'm not.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.150.174.186) -- Thursday, September 30 2004, 02:29 am

Clive, in ones heart.........

one is as young as one feels..i for one, yet my youth replaced by knowledge and of memories to reminisce and share..i refuse to grow up..and i repeat many times over and over again..refuse to grow up ....in good taste of course....what does age act like anyway?
'aye Clive...wanna join me in flying a kite
and running barefoot on the beach?
how 'bout a water fight next hot day? i'm just happy to be alive..such a passion in life... great poem..
Clive (67.42.141.76) -- Thursday, September 30 2004, 04:04 am

I'm with you

I'll walk with you on the beach,
I'll have that water fight with you and me,
;-)
barb (66.46.241.207) -- Friday, October 1 2004, 02:44 am

with age comes wisdom

the more birthdays we have the more experiences we have, which means more wisdom. Sure the young have healthy bodies but no life experiences the saying youth is wasted on the young is true. How many times have we said Iif I knew then What I know now.Can I scoot along beside you and terrie on the beach, Just make sure you guys are in front of my scooter so I don't get the sand in your faces.Ha
Clive (67.42.141.76) -- Friday, October 1 2004, 08:25 pm

yes

the more hearts the younger we are
 
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