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Your Love -tanka-
4 October, 2004
Author: Del

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So precious to me
Is your sweet undying love
I gave you my heart
To take care of forever
I trust you so sincerely

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Originally Submitted: September 24, 2004

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Comments on this poem/writing:

joyce ivy (68.19.189.174) -- Wednesday, October 6 2004, 03:15 am

sweet

short but sweet...it does feel good when you trust someone that much...joyce
gg4 l (10.22.5.3) -- Tuesday, March 21 2006, 08:06 pm

great

i think this is a beautiful poem and it reminds me of my boyfriend
 
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