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Making My Day -tanka-
4 October, 2004
Author: Del

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Music fills the air
While I'm sitting here dreaming
Thinking how someone
Is making my day for me
In his own sweet special way

------- Author's Notes -------

True love begins when nothing is looked for in return -Antoine De Saint-Exupery)


Originally Submitted: September 27, 2004

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.208.85) -- Tuesday, October 5 2004, 12:48 am

Del, simply ...sweet and sensitive......i

i sit in a crowded forum an we all applaud you w/a standing ovation......so much said with 24 words.....
joyce ivy (68.19.189.174) -- Wednesday, October 6 2004, 03:20 am

Del i agree

have to say again i agree with terrie so much said in so few words...
 
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