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Side By Side
7 October, 2004
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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Last night I could not sleep,
Last night I turned all night,
You came to my side and lay down,
Your back against mine it felt so good,
We turned and our lips met,
A kiss that lasted it seemed forever,
We pulled in closer to feel every touch,
As we heated up now more than a kiss,
I felt the fan blowing down upon my back,
Its cool breeze welcomed,
As we kissed and touched never knowing when to stop,
We carried on till our love now flowed,
Never to end but always a first,
I thank you for laying by my side
I’m glad you touch my life.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.150.170.243) -- Wednesday, October 6 2004, 11:41 pm

Clive, visually pleasant..and embracing...

for the eyes of a heart to read, the ears of a heart to hear...and the touch of a heart to feel from another...beautifully written and expressed...
Clive (67.42.141.76) -- Thursday, October 7 2004, 12:12 am

Dreams

This is where Dreams and thoughts come together, in the bedroom!!!!!!
Meridian (172.129.254.155) -- Thursday, October 7 2004, 12:24 am

Dag on Clive!

Hahhahha.... That comment tore me to pieces with laughter! It's your duty to mend me now! But, I see we quickly need to come to your aid to give you a rotating fan, or an air conditioner, so you won't be so heated.......oooo.....catch me there? LOL! "Side by Side", was just GRAND Clive!

Smiley face,
Meri
Clive (67.42.141.76) -- Thursday, October 7 2004, 12:26 am

Glad You like

The power of the mind put together with word can sometimes scare me,
Terrie* (65.148.212.13) -- Thursday, October 7 2004, 04:55 am

Clive, ;-)

know what cha mean....
keep that passion alive...
ya know me..
i try to be the first always...
to dream..i mean read...
keep that power of your mind healthy...
don't scare it away..
'aye i'm human..
psst great poem luv...
 
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