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The Song
7 October, 2004
Author: Moonstarshine

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"I hope you dance".....
the song he picked
from him..for me..
it gave me strength
in times of trials
life's denials..
" would you dance? "
his words echoed
stirring up a (yes)
from the abyss of
my soul.
And so he held me tight
oh! it seemed so right
we broke into a
slow waltz..
on the tune of romance
my head on his shoulder
serenading our dreams
he getting lost in
the fragrance of my being.
But..today I heard
the same song
sung by Ronan Keating
my heart stopped beating
each word pierced again and again
and I crumbled to the ground
in tears of pain..
the song ends
in vain.

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Ben Franklin (82.2.243.143) -- Thursday, October 7 2004, 04:17 pm

the power of dance....

I was wrapped in this amazing poem,
dancing is so powerfull,it sends you into a different state of mind..just like this poem did to me.
Ben
 
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