My Opponent
7 October, 2004
Author: Ben Franklin
You left me in a state of rage,
how can you leave me?
we are supposed to be engaged!!!
when I ask who bought you that perfume,
you reply with
'It doesnt concern you'.
You come home in the early hours of the morning,
just slide into bed,
without a warning.
We havent made Love in months,
our bed is no longer warm,
it seems to have frozen over and we are skating on thin
Ice,
which soon will break.
Love is a game for two,
I just never thought my opponent
would be you.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Terrie* (65.148.212.157) -- Thursday, October 7 2004, 06:08 pm i could see my breath in the midst of the coldness that was me writing "SMILE" on lifes window.......WOW!!you are a dynomite with words and expressions Luv..i do hope this is just that.......what it is....as it appears...just a read.....NOT about you...HUGS/LOVE |
| joyce ivy (68.19.169.250) -- Thursday, October 7 2004, 07:30 pm I agree with Terrie...hope it isn't about you...If this is real you better get out now....the poem was very good... |
| Terrie* (82.2.243.143) -- Thursday, October 7 2004, 08:34 pm hi Terrie*, not this is not about me, seen it alot though. glad ya liked it Ben x |
| Ben F (82.2.243.143) -- Thursday, October 7 2004, 08:35 pm hello again joyce, thank you for your warm comment. hope you have a good day. ben x |
| Terrie* (65.148.213.118) -- Friday, October 8 2004, 12:41 am wheww..i tell ya...i was getting my survival gear out...to come over and share w/ya.. ice pick, chisel,thermals , pop corn, hot cocoa...etc.(Giggle) i enjoy everything you your li' heart comes up with..but this one, if you'll notice ,had me hesitating..kinda had my already wan-dering mind ..won-dering...great read Hun... |
| Ben F (82.2.243.143) -- Friday, October 8 2004, 09:27 am thanks again Terrie*, your thoughts mean alot to me. much love Ben |
| Ben F (82.2.243.143) -- Friday, October 8 2004, 09:27 am thanks again Terrie*, your thoughts mean alot to me. much love Ben |
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