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Does Anyone Know Me
13 October, 2004
Author: Kali

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Do you know me?
Do I know you?
I feel like noone.
How about you?
Two noones here
with nothing to do.
Two noones here
both angry and blue.
You dont know me.
I don't know you,
because we can't see inside ourselves
enough to know ,who.

------- Author's Notes -------

I need someone else to tell me how they think my poems are.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

BARB (209.112.24.104) -- Wednesday, October 13 2004, 05:20 am

ok

your poems are very good sharing your feelings is what this site is all about. If you write from your heart you can't lose Kali. keep up the good writing.
stephanie (207.200.116.199) -- Thursday, March 31 2005, 10:37 am

nice i liked it

really good
 
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