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The Real Me
15 October, 2004
Author: Kali

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why do i feel this way
and have my feelings hide
why do i feel like there's nobody by my side
i hide the way i feel
they don't know the real me
depression's what i am
but joy is what they see
should i let them hear my poems
should i let them hear my pain
would they unerstand
or would they think i was insane
at first would they be kind
but then make fun of me
would they ever know again
what to think of me

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Comments on this poem/writing:

barb (209.112.24.48) -- Friday, October 15 2004, 04:44 am

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Ddo what makes you have less anquish and pain If talking with people will make you feel better than talk. If not telling people makes you feel stronger than don't tell just be aware that some might turn away ,if you do tell, but to me I think you should talk about how you feel.Get it out or it festers like a sore that won't heal. I'm not an expert but Ii know keeping something inside isn't good. Good luck and never give in.
joyce ivy (68.19.169.76) -- Friday, October 15 2004, 07:08 am

I AGREE WIT BARB

kali, you should always write what you feel...no matter what it is...it's always good to let it out...I write everyday..about everything...i have a site where i write about life... my family...relationships...and i also write what i feel at that moment in all my poems...you should read some of them...might make you understand a little more...one day i may be writing about angels and butterflies or my loves...the next it may be about demons inside my head...I just write what i feel...no matter what it is...getting things out of your head helps...believe me i have done it for years...i'd go crazy if i didn't...good luck
kali (12.221.182.10) -- Tuesday, October 19 2004, 01:33 am

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I'll always write and put my poems here,but
it's the people i know well and are friends with i'm afriad of letting hear my poems.thanks for the advise.

P.S. what poem should i let them hear?
Brittany (199.216.110.27) -- Monday, October 29 2007, 09:07 pm

can i use it

can i use your poem in school to show kids that other people can feel that this to not just them and to show how it can effect people to be alone
 
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