Why.... by Shy Surfer

Why are you here?
Why must you disturb my life?
Why do you walk in front of me?
Do you miss me?
Why are you doing this?
You hurt me enough already!
Why did you come into my life?
Was it fate?
Destiny?
Are you the one for me?
Or were we supposed to be together?
Why...

Amy (207.144.229.164) -- Monday, June 13 2005, 06:45 pm

Awww
Hey, I just read all your poems... thanks for giving me the link! You really have talent as a poet, I love how you write! Keep on writing and let me know when you have more poetry up! Talk to ya later!

mindfreak (68.51.151.2) -- Friday, June 16 2006, 03:41 am

why....a good question
you write as a modern poet which is good...speaking as fellow poet, you could use imagery well. You have that talent. Your emotions run deep....so should your work.

D'ja g a (74.184.154.116) -- Monday, January 7 2008, 04:07 am

not bad
when most people read a poem on somones emotions the say its good but really dont understand, and it seems that no mater how hard you try you just cant explain, it may just be me but some peoples poems seem cryptic, or maby its just mine, oh well your a pretty good writer

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