I Had A Vision... by Terrie*

I had a vision of something so sweet..
I took the night off from work
for reasons unknown..
i wasn't tired
just deeply inspired..

I tried falling asleep..
I tossed and turned
until I was out

my husband was my vision...
and you know what..
it was as if though he had something to say..
but all he did was look at me

he stood above me
with the same innocent love stare in his eyes
I know subconsciencely I was dead to the world ..
but not to him..

I know life is not fair..
I'm nothing w/o him...

I broke out in tears ..
before he left..
I asked him to take me along..
can you believe he turned me down?

this made me cry much more..
all I heard was the echo of his words..

Babe,love is still here..
and very much alive..
someone else needs you now..
give him the love that was mine

his touch was so real..
his lips were so soft like I remembered them
his hands so strong, his body so solid
his embrace so warm..I miss him so...
but I had no control;
I had to let him to go

I stopped crying
long enough to catch my breath
i felt a sensual tender kiss on my lips
then I opened my eyes..
and my baby was gone.....

Clive (67.42.132.212) -- Monday, October 25 2004, 09:42 pm

he is with you
The visions of him will always be,
That smell he had you'll always feel,
For his life with you was special through and through, He is apart of you till your dieing day,
He loves you now just like he did back then,
He misses your powerful touch,

I love this vision Terrie my friend

Terrie* (65.150.175.112) -- Monday, October 25 2004, 11:31 pm

Clive, your so right.....thank you sweetie..
and as always you know where my heart has been..and where it is going..couldn't have done it w/o your encouraging words..

isn't it a lovely vision?...i can close my eyes and still feel his love...

Clive (67.42.132.212) -- Monday, October 25 2004, 11:48 pm

Always
You always will, as he feels yours I'm sure

Meri (172.149.34.123) -- Monday, October 25 2004, 11:55 pm

Fortitude
Your husband was your vision. This was heartfelt. This is a love story with an unhappy ending, but it's good to see you living your life day by day, in spite of, the grief, and the pain---and that truly makes you a strong woman!

Very touching poem!
Smiley face,
Meri

Terrie* (65.148.203.23) -- Tuesday, October 26 2004, 05:39 am

Clive, as always...
your words touch me deep...always felt him and much more..

thank you you always hold my heart in what you say..HUGS/LOVE..

Terrie* (65.148.203.23) -- Tuesday, October 26 2004, 05:44 am

Meri, you have such a loving heart ...
would you believe that i am barely becoming that stron person i should of been ..thanx to the love God placed into my life...he is what made me strong...i have my moments of tears that over whelm me..but i can place them under control with a disciplined heart..

HUGS/LOVE....(Smile)

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