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Hatred Not Love
28 October, 2004
Author: Melissa L

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I know you hate me
You said you would kill me
But ill save you the trouble
and do it myself
So ill grab a knife
And begin to slice
I cut deeper
And bleed through the night
The look of happiness on your face
As i lay there and die
Makes me cry and wonder why
I ever loved you
And if you ever loved me

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Comments on this poem/writing:

stephany (206.72.0.51) -- Tuesday, October 4 2005, 10:08 pm

why do we need a title

i think that this is a great poem. i can totally relate!
d-loke (205.154.6.35) -- Thursday, May 18 2006, 05:35 pm

why does love allways end in hatred

i like your poem. i totally love love stuff like that.u should write more like it.
 
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