Suicidal Tendencies by Melissa L

I go to the kitchen, take out a knife,
I look at my wrist and begin to slice:
Goodbye to the suffering,
Goodbye to the pain,
Goodbye to the anger,
Goodbye to the hate..
I slice deeper and see the blood drain,
my eyes look in horror,
but I smile at the sight,
I close my eyes and wake up in fright.
It was all a dream, I am alive.
Suicidal Tendencies stay in my mind.

Vampyr Lost In Love (63.184.176.238) -- Saturday, October 30 2004, 01:57 am

i feel exactally the same way
i have this feeling of depression for a little while...i tryed to kill myself just the other night

Terrie* (65.148.230.166) -- Saturday, October 30 2004, 02:18 am

Melissa, also to Vampyr Lost In Love..
my god you are both just babies, as i read this i shedd tears.because i am a mom of two....moms tend to do that..for other moms children..i could never imagine myself w/o my two children, they are the air that i breath...just as i know your mums feel the same..darlings look at yourselves you have your whole life ahead of you..you shouldn't live in darkness... think of the many children or daughter or son of your own.. you are destined to have..i apologize for stepping over on my motherly grounds..but ..as a mother , friend and child advocate..i see you girls as my own you should be enjoying your young years, that is the advice i have instructed my two in hanging out with friends..you both need to look into your lives and don't ever think of taking it away from yourself..do not let depression get to you.. go meet w/friends..meet new ones..hang out at the mall..i hope you do not keep these thoughts in your mind...i had to speak what my heart felt...

i hope your next writing will be about your uplifting soul.......you both mean something to all of us...

Melissa L (207.30.145.6) -- Tuesday, November 2 2004, 04:48 pm

that was nice
That was a very nice comment and thank you for that...i never thought of this from someone elses point of view.

casey b (12.175.230.59) -- Saturday, October 20 2007, 02:18 am

thats a goog poem
i have suicidal thaough alot also... i hope thing get better..

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