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Our Hearts
29 October, 2004
Author: LinzAy

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My heart broke
The instant I realized I let your own fall from my hand
When I saw all your pain escape your eyes in tiny droplets
My heart broke

And it's all my fault
Every memory you hold that brings those same tears to your eyes
Every pain in your heart
...All my fault

I love you like I've never loved another
Yet, I let you down
I succeeded in making your fears come to life
Yet, I love you

I'm sorry I chose those mistakes over your emotions
Over your heart
I'm sorry I brought everyones words to life
I'm sorry I broke our hearts

------- Author's Notes -------

Just a poem, no truth :)

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.142.64.249) -- Saturday, October 30 2004, 07:45 am

LinzAy, shattering of a heart....felt ..ouch..

your great with words when you turn them lose from your heart and let them flow to your pen..felt the shattering of two hearts...

love your work...keep that poetic heart ignited....
LinzAy (152.163.100.130) -- Sunday, October 31 2004, 09:36 pm

Terrie

thankyou for your comment:) Though, it's not written out of truth...muh jeffers and i are still doing great...

thankyou for your read and comment
 
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