So F***ed Up by Mere

I should not be living, I should totally be dead,
All the sh*t I say and think gets stuck up in my head,
Sometimes I wish to never awake,
I can't do that thought, God forsake!!

I want to die, just leave me here,
Take too much vodka or beer,
O.D. on aspirin, kill me please!
I can't now thought, cause I'm a sleaze.

I'm so going to hell,
But it's hard to tell,
Can't walk without stumbling,
Can't even talk without mumbling.

barb (216.123.57.45) -- Friday, October 29 2004, 10:58 pm

kids read this
Pplease put your anger on paper to get it out but please watch what you put on here kids are impressive and what they read should be positive not negative.

RinRin (66.56.198.47) -- Saturday, October 30 2004, 03:34 pm

Kids
Sorry, Barb, but I don't agree. Kids write stuff like this too. Sometimes you need to let the world know what you're feeling. Let them tell us what they need to tell us.

barb (216.123.56.5) -- Saturday, October 30 2004, 04:23 pm

Guess I just think too much.Hhaaa
RinRin I didn't mean kids 16 or 17 I meeant kids my grandkids age 13 and 8 old enough to read but not old enough to understand things.

Mere (69.18.77.56) -- Monday, November 1 2004, 03:46 am

Hmm...
Well, I'm 14, so yeah, I think I know what I'm writing.

LinzAy (152.163.100.130) -- Monday, November 1 2004, 04:43 pm

understanding
Barb, not to gang up on you or anything, but at age 13 I understood so much happiness...but i also understood hate, sadness, and pain. The world is a different and a more in your face kind of place now. A lot of those aged kids know exactly what this poem is and stands for to someone.

And Mere....no need to get rudely defensive, these comments are just the thoughts of other talented writers, with no harsh feelings intended..just opinions.

Back onto the poem...i like the last two lines the most :)

Jessica! (68.99.202.244) -- Friday, November 5 2004, 03:03 am

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I LOVE YOU BABYDOLL!!! you know that i'm here to talk to you! and im sorry if i don't understand...but I love you with all my heart...and u best not be leavin me! or I'll leave this ugly world as well...tear

Ben F (81.100.175.39) -- Sunday, November 7 2004, 09:25 pm

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not everything in this world is easy to potray as positive.
like linzAy said the world is so much different now,more pressure then ever.

mere I liked this,but you have to stay strong.
if you stumble and fall flat on your face,
get up again!
never be afraid of failing.

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