With This Knife by Vampyr Lost In Love

With this knife
That cuts me
All my pain
Is gone

All the anger
And pain is now
Written out in
Blood

All of it gone
With a few
Quick cuts
From this knife

Everyone sees
My smiles
They don't
See where
The knife has
Met my flesh
To make me
Bleed crimson
Rivers of pain
Leaving my body

Clive (67.42.132.212) -- Saturday, October 30 2004, 04:57 pm

Oil
Pain comes in different forms inside pain that no one sees, Then the pain that all see from the scar, As said before your writing is good it flows like life not wanting to end, I write in a different way, but still can see nature in your words.
Blood is the oil of life

Vampyr Lost In Love (63.184.177.234) -- Monday, November 1 2004, 04:28 am

clive
i am sorry you don't understand...but i don't want to stay alive in this horrad life....i really am happy you like my writting if it were about anything but cutting myself but i have done it since the sixth grade....i am truely sorry

Clive (67.42.132.212) -- Tuesday, November 2 2004, 03:53 pm

I understand
More than you know I understand well,
What I'm trying to say to you there is so much more in live, just give it a chance to show,
Everyday tell you that you love you and you are worth everyones loves

Melissa L (207.30.145.6) -- Tuesday, November 2 2004, 05:00 pm

expression
I like this poem...and i kno where your comming from...for me writing is a form of expression even if i dont really mean what i write. writing about suicide makes me feel better...i was close one time but i talked to my big sister and she talked me out of it and she helped me through it...im 15 years old and young...theres a lot to find out in life...it seems like we have a lot in common...

Vampyr Lost In Love (63.178.25.151) -- Tuesday, November 2 2004, 11:30 pm

Melissa L. And Clive
Melissa...what i write about i have done...it's just a way to tell someone or thing about what i have just done...i have only one friend who can talk me out of anything that could truely hurt me...i love him to pieces...and now he is hundreds of miles away from me...i miss him a lot...but his lil sis is preety much like him so i can talk to her some times...but nothing is like him...
Clive...i have gave my life 15 years worth of trying...i love everyone in my life...whether they have been good or bad to me...but i still give everyday a chance...i most likly won't hurt myself to bad...just enough to know i'm alive...but it great to be me when everything goes good...but thanks for letting me know that you do understand.Thanx you

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