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I Want To Say Hi
2 November, 2004
Author: Vampyr Lost In Love

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I seen you looking at me
As I walked by
You acted as if you wanted
To say something
But I seen that same
Look in your eyes
As I did on that night I seen
You last
I walk by and look at you
To see if you were
Looking back at me
I wanted to say "hi"
To you but didn't know
How you would react to
Me talking to you
But I seen that look
In your eyes like you wanted
Me to say something
So you would have a reason
To say something to me back
I just want to say "hi"
And give you a huge hug
And kiss like we used to do
I still love you
And I always will
And I want to say "hi" to you
Everytime I see you

------- Author's Notes -------

I seen this guy on Halloween...and we just looked at each other...knowing we should talk...but we didn't!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (67.42.132.212) -- Tuesday, November 2 2004, 04:03 pm

It can B hard

To say hi again is a big step, But to have friends you can never have too many, so next time just in passing say HI, as your walking passed.
Terrie* (65.148.211.228) -- Tuesday, November 2 2004, 04:26 pm

Vampyr L i L , NEVER PUT OFF SAYING "HI"

i agree w/ Clive...sweetie, be the first to acknowledge...we never know the outcome of anything until we present it and apply our true self to it....we choose what to do about it..some things we can control..have you ever gone on in life thinking ...only if i would have? then i know your pickin' up on what i'm sayin'...sooooo what cha' waitin' for girl? put your best foot forward... yeap..life is too short..you may lose out on a chance...never..and i mean never allow a great opportunity slip you by..it may be that he is too shy and perhaps you are too...but...the secret is to take that first step... helps break that barrier...love was always close by to MY heart and i never knew it...yet, i felt it.. i almost lost out.....until it came to me and i felt the warmth of his soul more intense .believe me i spoke up.....married him 2 years later.....26 years ago ;-)

Good Luck......you write so well..from this piece i can tell you will not have a problem...your heart is sincere...and he will feel that....
Vampyr Lost In Love (63.178.25.151) -- Tuesday, November 2 2004, 11:11 pm

you guys are helpful

i have trouble speaking up to people i have fallen with..i just have to so thax so much for you advice
Terrie* (65.147.241.222) -- Tuesday, November 2 2004, 11:24 pm

Vampyr L i l, you are sooo very welcomed.......

lil' one...You have everything you need INSIDE your HEART...start from there....you will do fine sweetie.# 1 key is..TRUST in your self..always put trust in yourself and others will do the same...
Clive (67.42.132.212) -- Tuesday, November 2 2004, 11:45 pm

take care

you said hi to us, through your words it takes a lot to put yourself on that line,
You'll do fine we are still here to support you
Vampyr Lost In Love (63.184.177.14) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 10:39 pm

i am doing better

just the last night i told the guy who i have not seen in forever just how i felt about him....that i loved him and he said i love you 2...so the only bad part is my mother has forbidden me to talk to him...but at least i know how he feels about me and to same for him
 
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