Where I Come From
3 November, 2004
Author: Ben Franklin
Iv'e come back to earth,
Iv'e been watching from the outside of this circle,
where I come from the sky is permently purple.
We take life at a slow pace,
but on your planet you all seem to be in a never ending
race,
On my planet there is no pain of suffering.
we fill each other with love,
its amazing how you can make someone feel with just a simple
hug,
To much war here,
your leaders taking a stand
with a gun and bible in their hand,
who wants to follow me to my beautiful land?
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Meridian (172.153.251.4) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 02:40 am Take me Ben! When are we going? Say you'll pack your bags tonight, and we leave town together to that magnificent Planet! I know how you feel on this one! You make me think of a highway or an interstate, and how you want to take the first exit you see to get away, where the traffic isn't too congested. See, your powerful poem made me dream also! These are one of the peaceful and glorious dreams! Persevere brother! Smiley face, Meri |
| Terrie* (65.148.230.112) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 03:10 am Perfection ....described in your words...a world to love and live for... loved your words...thanx for the lovely peaceful...guide upon pleasantly Serene soil... and that great hug... |
| Meri... (82.2.243.143) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 05:14 pm hi meri,how u doing?glad you liked it,thanks alot. take care Ben |
| Terrie* (82.2.243.143) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 05:16 pm hi terrie*,how are you? i have this world...all in my head. take care Ben. p.s. still working on a poem for amy. |
| Terrie* (65.148.233.174) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 06:18 pm ya know i always enjoy your work, i have one posted just for you...."His Words" p.s no need to write one for amy, she has plenty written ...thank you so much ..if you do write a childrens poem write it for "ALL" the children no name specifics..thanx... |
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