His Words....
3 November, 2004
Author: Terrie*
his words have meaning
far beyond his years
his words have a voice
yet to be heard
his words describe the violence, the hunger
the misfortunes we ignore
his words are enriching
his words are searching
for a heart to come forth
his words are a prayer
they make you think,
they make you wonder..
they make you appreciate what you have..
and think less of what you lack
there are far many whom never thought to share
the world that they lived in
because they thought ..
that was what life was supposed to be like
imagine a child having to skip many meals at night..
imagine a father having to seek shelter
every day every night
imagine a mother having to bury her children
many at a time
some countries are able
while others are not..
we often forget our war-torn soldiers of life
as we ignore wore-torn soldiers of our own heart
the next time you read upon his words
let every line absorb deep into your soul....
his words express alot of pain and understanding..
and as deminsional as expressed
you too will feel and touch the pain..
and begin to understand..
------- Author's Notes -------
this is for our dear friend "Ben Franklin AKA Hushy" thank you for your words...... |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Meridian (172.153.251.4) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 03:22 am Terrie, I tell you, you're something else! Ben will be surprised when he reads this, because everything you've written in this poem about him, he speaks of in his poetry! He talks about society, and real-life facts in today's world! Both of ya'll blow my mind with such intelligent, forceful words that make this not-so-good day, have a happy ending to it! You are truly an angel Terrie! You and Ben! True, divine words! WONDERFUL poem! Smiley face, Meri |
| joyce ivy (68.19.188.222) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 08:20 pm Terrie this is very good...I think it might just be your best...every word so true...love it |
| Ben F (82.2.243.143) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 08:42 pm I thank you. words cant explain how touched I am. you truly are a angel, so glad I found this world of ours. much love Ben |
| Terrie* (65.148.207.124) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 10:01 pm i hope ya continue to have happy dayz... ya know Ben , his words get us hooked... i think i was the Angel that got shoved off of a cloud on a dare LOL...kept myself in mischif hahahaa |
| Terrie* (65.148.207.124) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 10:02 pm i'm pleased that ya thought this was good.... thanx for readin'/commentin'.... |
| Terrie* (65.148.207.124) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 10:07 pm and someday all will hear your words...THEY WILL DRAW NEAR... your sensitive way of writing has tugged on my heart..i am so honored that ya were pleased by this...when truth and honesty makes an apperance good things come out of it...and this was the result from me reading your words.... HUGS/LOVE.... |
| Ben F (81.100.175.39) -- Friday, November 5 2004, 03:29 pm thank you. x |
| Terrie* (65.148.206.190) -- Saturday, November 6 2004, 02:42 am YOUR VERY MUCH WELCOMED..... HUGS/LOVE....Aimed at ya.. |
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