Her Words Have Wings...
3 November, 2004
Author: Terrie*
she pulls every word from the sky
she paints a smile
upon a distraught soul
with the gentle touch of her brush
her words have wings
upon her canvas
each letter carries a tune
of a magestic flute
every tear that drops
she catches individually
and places them into her heart
you can feel the warmth
that her heart gives out
as it defrosts all negative thoughts
a vision of her
a silhouette
that spells love
when you close your eyes
and look into her heart
------- Author's Notes -------
for a good friend of ours "our loving Capricorn" she has a unique way of capturing an audience w/o trying..when we allow ourselves to feel..with our heart ..we see beyond the protective shell... |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| barb (209.112.24.105) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 05:06 pm What a beautiful tribute to a lady that deserves it.Tthank-you for writing this for her Terrie.))) |
| Terrie* (65.148.233.174) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 06:19 pm your more than welcomed... indeed she does deserve it....God Bless... |
| Meridian (172.166.249.176) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 06:22 pm Just as much as you do! Terrie, you're on the ball with these dedications! I believe you've outdone yourself again! This will make Cap's day! Nice one Lady T! Cap, has a very unique way of writing like you and others! Smiley faces to all three of you! Barb, Terrie, and Cap! Meridian |
| Terrie* (65.148.233.174) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 06:50 pm it's rollin' in your direction...just toss it back gently LOL..yes many of you here deserve dedications..as long as i have bits of breath within me ..i will share what my heart feels about ya all.. i hope she likes....thanx once again.. God Bless......... |
| joyce ivy (68.19.188.222) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 08:29 pm wonderful words you've written again terrie... beautifully captured inside your soul Cap should love it... |
| Terrie* (65.148.207.124) -- Wednesday, November 3 2004, 10:14 pm sometimes a heart can feel another caring heart by the words that they leave behind on a note or by the words they write in a poem.. but more by how they speak of another soul..and Cap has that in her..she stands out in a crowd...with the unconditional love that illuminates from her soul... her honesty has earned her her respect in the clouds... |
| Capricorn (82.36.129.85) -- Thursday, November 4 2004, 12:13 am Oh -- this is so unexpected, I'm sitting here blubbering. Your poem is so wonderful -- full of vivid images and all for me. I am truly touched by your thoughts of me writtn in the most beautiful words. Oh thanks, I feel so honoured -- I'm off to find some tissues..... |
| Terrie* (65.148.208.180) -- Thursday, November 4 2004, 05:37 pm not enough words used to fully color and describe you and your inner soul ... HUGS/LOVE.... |
| barb (209.112.22.38) -- Thursday, November 4 2004, 08:45 pm If you blubbered then Terrie did good.A perfect poem for a sensitive person.))))) |
| Capricorn (82.36.129.85) -- Friday, November 5 2004, 12:07 am Thanks again Terrie -- I feel elated that someone should think of me. Thanks all you guys -- you've given me a boost in my life just when I need it. |
| Terrie* (65.148.202.107) -- Friday, November 5 2004, 12:27 am Cap in this life we touch many things that become a part of us..have you not ever sat in total silence muting the outside world and listened with your full hearts attention to a song, that grabbed at you? and you found yourself as a big part of that song? i know doesn't make sense , the many that DO know me reflect the same of me LOL i make absolute no sense but only when it is felt..i am one of many that takes words deep into myself and sets them free by allowing them to form life and reason..i see the gifts in front of me..and the ones whom bear those gifts...in a shorter note..those that truely know me know i speak the truth..and what you read is ALL TRUTH... |
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