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To Do
4 November, 2004
Author: Mike

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I need to get away now.
I need to break loose.
I need to let it all out
Before I end up in the noose.

I need to rid myself from all the fears.
I need to fight against all the lies.
I need to dam this flood of tears
That keep pouring from my eyes.

I need to do all this soon
Before it all breaks out.
Before I do something I regret -
You know what I'm talking about.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Webster (4.250.21.105) -- Thursday, November 4 2004, 08:15 pm

Life goes on

I do know what you are talking about but sometimes the mountain is too high.
Leah (204.112.162.35) -- Wednesday, January 5 2005, 10:51 am

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great work sometimes u need to break loose b 4 it breaks you....you poems hold truth and strength.....
LBK (84.9.36.131) -- Saturday, March 12 2005, 12:13 am

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I agree, if you let it all out, then you'd be able to let it go...
 
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