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We Are Divine
4 November, 2004
Author: Pamela O'Brien

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Somewhere between the normality & divinity
Of what You & I have
There is a quality for which
There is no existing word

Our ability to envision a future together
But not depend on it
And live for every moment as what we are
Not what we will be

Our independence from one another &
Appreciation for our seperate selves
Which in some ironic manner
Only strengthens this intimate bond

The realization that we do not need;
We choose, each other
Knowing we could survive on our own
And also knowing we'll never have to.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Pondering Red (65.93.152.78) -- Thursday, November 4 2004, 03:01 am

divine

great expression of paradoxes,the yin and yang of feeling and life-relationships...
Martin Vann (67.234.27.184) -- Tuesday, November 9 2004, 06:08 pm

The best Poem, You Ever Pend, And Shared With Us

Pam,

This poem, takes our dreames, to reality, what a place you selected, to share thes more than, words, with us. Yes, we are independent, traveling our onw roods, then sometimes, we see, this is not a road, but a plan and we will find love, salvation at its end, then beging, to be who we are, easy road to travel, when you find love.

I thank you for this poem, so wonderful and true, truth is what we find, alond the course, you have describe.

I love this revelation, you call a poem!
MV
Pamela (66.225.130.57) -- Tuesday, November 9 2004, 09:32 pm

Thank You

Thank you so much for your kind responses to this revelation/poem! I appreciate the feedback on such a personal topic. But I still wish I could find a word to fairly describe this "quality". I suppose there couldn't be beccause of the apparent ying & yang of it all.
Glad you liked it, and thanks again for commenting!
 
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