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Hatred
5 November, 2004
Author: Mere

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I know you hate me, I know I'm wrong,
I'm writing a poem, and singing a depressing song,
You know me enough to tell me I'm dumb,
Did you know I was 7, and still sucking my thumb?
You know that I lost, but you think I won,
Just like your granny, you drink more than ever,
You're right, I do, now I'll pull the lever,
Who cares if I drink, atleast I f***ing think,
Even my life is beginning to shrink.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

stephanie (209.215.20.220) -- Friday, June 24 2005, 04:14 am

very true

i know what u mean every day seem to be more and more painful and i know everyone hates me too
stephany (206.72.0.51) -- Tuesday, October 4 2005, 10:13 pm

there's no point to have a title!

i dont think i like this poem very much.i think that its okay but what does it mean that u were "7 and still suckin your thumb"????
 
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