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Bye
9 November, 2004
Author: Kali

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goodbye
i can't take life anymore
and i left so few signs
few enough to ignore
my plaster smile kept you from seeing the pain
and from seeing each day the emotianal strain
soon the meds will kick in
so i must say goodbye
you loved me but i never knew why
i'd never want to make you sad
but the pain was all just getting to bad
your not to blame so please don't cry
i just couldn't stand life
i just had to die

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Me (12.221.182.10) -- Wednesday, November 24 2004, 03:05 am

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Obviosly noone here cares if i die. oh well. noone else seems to care either.
Tarna (4.224.39.210) -- Wednesday, November 24 2004, 06:07 am

People Care...

...Even if you don't know it. Don't ever let depression win. This poem cries with desperation of need for understanding of the illness. Hope the writer finds what her/she is looking for. (other than death that is)
kali (12.221.182.10) -- Tuesday, November 30 2004, 11:06 pm

don't worriy

I just wrote this to see if anyone here cared.I think I'll do something less extreme,like homeschooling through Jr.high, or seeing a counsler.thanks for your concern though.
kelsey (10.0.24.171) -- Friday, September 22 2006, 05:09 pm

good

if i wouldn't have read this i would already be dead
 
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