The Way You Make Me Feel....
9 November, 2004
Author: Jughead
That every single thing you do.
That every single movement you make...
It means something to me...
Your reaction to the things i say...
The silence coming from you when i crack a joke...
It aint good...
It demoralises me...
That day...
At that table...
I'll forever remember it...
It's craved so deeply in to me that no matter how hard i try to rub it off..
It doesn't come off...
You cold and only reply...
It hurts...
You make me want to be a better man...
A cultivated one...
A person who suits your bill of a man...
A man whom you would fall deeply in love with...
I know no big words nor do i possess the skills that amazes...
All i have is a heart a pure loving one..
Waiting for you to accept and i will cherish you like no one has ever done...
My love for you would be so great that ot would go down into the books of records...
It will be recorded in to the historical moments...
As the greatest love...
How high the sky i dare not say...
Scale it for you i might not be able to
but to love and protect you from harm and hurt...
That i cross my heart and swear i promise to...
With my life i will not let you get hurt...
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Comments on this poem/writing:
Meridian (172.142.133.183) -- Wednesday, November 10 2004, 11:55 pm I missed you! Hey Jughead! She makes you feel like doing a triple lutz, like Michelle Quan, because the woman in your life makes you feel light on your feet, like an ice skater! I like the way you just let your heart overflow with love in the way you describe how that woman in your life does that thing that you like! Great words! Fully expressive! Smiley face, Meri |
Jughead (220.255.57.213) -- Friday, November 12 2004, 06:23 am Your comments has always brighten up my day... Oh haha been having exam not much time to write...Your nice... Happy Thoughts Jugg |
christine *aka* dimples (210.55.106.37) -- Thursday, January 20 2005, 09:56 am you sound like such an amazing person, that gal dosent no wat she's missing out on. she's probably not even worth it, if she makes you feel worthless, coz you have an incredible talent, you are an amazing person. dont let some girl affect the way you think of yourself. |
Aaron (68.17.228.97) -- Tuesday, May 10 2005, 11:39 am hey that is also something that happened to me i just got over it. It also happened at a table....how coincidental...I enjoyed it I agree with both of those people. |
Jughead (219.74.205.91) -- Tuesday, May 10 2005, 04:05 pm The exact same thing happened to you too... Totally amazing. |
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