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Just Think..
20 November, 2004
Author: Ben Franklin

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you are destroying life's with what you sell,
Andrews spent £50 this week,
cannabis putting his mind through hell,

started of with one,
then two,
then the paranoia,
who were his friends?
he never knew.

You sell drugs to the people,
why dont you use that same knowledge of making money
and pursue something legal.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Faith (216.167.226.93) -- Tuesday, November 23 2004, 10:14 pm

Good Job

I like the meaning behind this poem this really touched home for me keep up the good work.
Hugs,
Faith
Ben F (81.100.175.39) -- Tuesday, November 23 2004, 11:52 pm

faith

hello there!
this is about me,
I started smokin when I was 14 and i'll tell ya it catches up with you in the end,
thats why I cant stand people who promote the stuff.
it puts my priorities out of site.
thanks for the comment faith.
take care
Ben
x
Kaylee Thornock (163.6.254.139) -- Friday, November 23 2007, 07:57 pm

Good Job!!!

I really liked your oem. It had alot of meaning to me because I used to smoke Bud. I quit because I seen how bad it was to my body. Now, I am in a program for 6 months for it...... No drug is worth gettin taken away from your family! Believe me. I know. This is my third program and I hav ejust barely realised that.
 
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