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Once I Had A Dear Friend
23 March, 2003
Author: Amanda C.

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Once I had a dear friend,
Maybe more than just a friend
He made me forget about life's troubles,
He made me jovial and cheerful,
He kept me entertained.
He was my source of life, love, and energy
My only comfort,
He was a shoulder, on which I leant on,
He was a getaway from life,
I'll never forget him.

Once I had a dear friend,
Maybe more than just a friend
But as I woke up one day,
I realized that life has taken him away.
I was solemn and depressed, no more cheery and happy
My heart was broken into tiny little pieces,
My life was shattered into different roads.
Fate had taken my friend away.
What could I do to make it up?
What could I do but remember him?

Once I had a dear friend,
Maybe more than just a friend.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (205.188.209.137) -- Monday, March 24 2003, 09:58 am

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Like the poem, good writing! I hope i won't have to be coming back to this poem for real life reasons anytime soon, but it's something i always fear...losing a friend. My friends are my life. I'd go crazy if i had to go through this....but anyways...good poem!
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, March 25 2003, 02:16 am

i agree with linzay

Good poem i hope i wont have to face that challenge any time soon.
Martin Vann (67.30.64.192) -- Wednesday, March 26 2003, 01:26 am

Amanda, you have made it up to your friend...,

Amanda,

The love and respect you have shown for this friend, is more than most would ever say. Now, your friend is someone, we all want by our side, but very few, have known a friend, like you do.

This friend is still with you and now, you share that friendship (love) with us, thank you for letting us, be your new friends, for we, love you to.

From all Of Us At Dreamersreality, Thank You Amanda, now we have two new friends, you and your friend are part of us and this will never end.

MartinV
Amanda (217.29.140.5) -- Sunday, June 8 2003, 06:51 pm

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hey guys well thank u all....actually this friend in the poem was this really sweet guy....we liked each other for like 3 years but he was too shy,and then he transfered school...so i was really down...but now it all worked out....n its all cool
 
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