I'm Thinking Of You by Fallen_Angel

Heavy green eyes,and slipping fingertips
fallen from the steering wheel.
Another time the clock slowly ticks
I was thinking of you,I cant believe its came to this,
I was thinking of you,when the car began to flip
the stale wind cant feel the emptiness
I need you by my side,I'm sorry,I left you there my dear.
Crying,lying there unconscious.upon the street
I was thinking of you, when she nearly took away my angel
I'm sorry,I didn't save you darling.
A smash aggainst the rear end,
Tears among st my face
It's alright I'll make it OK
some day..I promise,but there's nothing I can do
I'm use to this,just listen to the lack of strength in your voice
the weakness in your breaths
while I lay there in silence with nothing to say
besides I'm sorry
I wasn't there to wipe the tears from your face
I'm sorry I couldn't save you.
Clean your wounds with my love.
I was thinking of you,when she nearly took your life.
when the clock hit four am.and agony was whipped upon your skin
I was thinking of you,when you laid broken.
Hello my love,
I'm writing this addressed
to the heavens above
please reply if received
Please tell me your Ok,
To help me not to cry
Tell me you need me,
in your gentle voice,
And do it slowly
Because each second you speak
you put me back together piece by piece
your breaths heavy,and losing strength
I'm so far away,with nothing to give
Just my silent prayers and tears,
that beg for you to live.
I'm sorry I cant hold your hand
threw the darkness
while you lay there,scared,alone,and broken
upon the hospital bed.
Closing my eyes,and visualize you
But reality comes and cuts the thoughts into two.
Hello,my love,I know I cant save you.
But I was just writing too
say,I love you.and I'm thinking of you

Sweet Sara (12.105.167.235) -- Tuesday, November 30 2004, 04:12 pm

speechless
great poem mallisa, it was touching, i almost cried! is it a real poem? it realy reaches out to the reader. good one!

sara

Rubydragon (82.10.190.131) -- Wednesday, December 1 2004, 06:45 pm

Wow
Your captured me right fom the start, and you made my heart race as my tears fall, no one has done that in a long time. amazingly written.

Mallisa (24.119.116.127) -- Thursday, December 2 2004, 01:18 am

no title
Yeah its a true poem...and im glad you liked it thank you very much

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