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A Box Of Memories
28 November, 2004
Author: Ben Franklin

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A Box of memories,
I find the love letters you first sent to me,
trying your very best to tempt me,
they made me feel full when I felt empty

I find the snaps of our holiday to spain,
£316 each for two weeks of bloody rain!
i'ts fair to say we never went again!

I find a picture of our wedding day,
it gives me a scare..
I cant belive I had that style of hair!!!
but hey it was the eighties
nobody cared!

I find your tie that I always helped you out with
in the morning,
tying it around your neck
while your standing in front of the mirror
barely awake and yawning

I will never forget you Henry..
for you will always be
in my box of memories.

------- Author's Notes -------

To anybody who has lost someone

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ben F (81.100.175.39) -- Monday, November 29 2004, 01:23 pm

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this is not about me,I have know idea what its like to loose someone so close to you,
but at the same time its good to remember the good times.
Terrie* (65.135.86.49) -- Monday, November 29 2004, 05:09 pm

Ben, thank you ....for the box of memories...

and for these precious words from your heart......
i wish i hadn't but unfortunantly i did lose many along with somebody very special...my first and last love...the father of my kids...i always think of him on many things that i do..i see him in my son and daughter's smile and heart everyday...i keep his memory alive...by remembering the silly ,crazy happy times verses his last days...and by all i do..thats why every so often i bring back some poetry i wrote to and about him.....thank you for sharing...we appreciate someone when they are alive, it is more often when we lose that special someone that we realize how much we really appreciated them ...


so precious are your words....
Ben F (81.100.175.39) -- Monday, November 29 2004, 10:58 pm

Terrie*

Im glad you can relate(but at the same time not so gald!).
its feels good to post a poem as im working lates at the mo.
take care
much love
Ben
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Natalie L (194.82.83.250) -- Tuesday, November 30 2004, 05:53 pm

This reminds me...

of my nan's sister. Her husband passed away recently. I can imagine her looking through his belongings and remembering the good times, the bad times, and the little things that only she would have noticed about him.
This is really well written, and I think you captured that moment.
Nat
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Natalie L (194.82.83.250) -- Tuesday, November 30 2004, 05:56 pm

And...

how do you always manage to write from someone else's perspective so well?
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Ben F (81.100.175.39) -- Wednesday, December 1 2004, 12:35 pm

nat

glad you liked it,
and to answer your question.....i really dont know!
 
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