It's My Life
29 November, 2004
Author: Faye
I have been having
the worst few weeks
of my life.
I do not know
whether it the drugs
or the alcohol that
has ruined my life,
or whether my ruined life
has made me turn to
drugs and alcohol.
I feel it maybe the
later,
for I have fun
when I am,
as high as a kite
or as drunk as an
old man.
But maybe if...
yes if.
I said it.
maybe if they
weren't part...
part of me
of my life
not theirs...
well, they dont understand.
I have fun...
in my ruined life.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Faye (172.202.128.160) -- Sunday, November 28 2004, 10:32 pm Sorry it may not make much sense. sorry. |
| Tarna (4.224.66.201) -- Monday, November 29 2004, 03:13 am makes sense to me. I like the repeating and kind of self speaking in this poem like you are thinking, yes, thinking aloud. :)Neat and different... good job |
| Linzie and Fiona (212.219.247.129) -- Tuesday, June 24 2008, 01:16 pm We love this poem! We will use it as a source for our latest theatrical production. Thankyou. |
| caitlin suiter (68.118.67.68) -- Tuesday, December 16 2008, 02:04 am Can i plese use your poem to put on my myspace? It totally fits me:) Ha and ill put thats its buy you so everone knows:) |
| lala*** (66.99.246.227) -- Thursday, December 18 2008, 10:37 pm this poem comments for am passing by nice poem do more |
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