Awkward Silence
2 December, 2004
Author: Cookey
Have you ever lived a moment
That consisted of not much
Of few seconds of stability
Then an hour without touch
Jus two faces sitting awkwardly
Glaring at the moon
Wishing with all their hearts
That one would make a move
A long ten minutes pass
One shuffles their feet
Reaches out their hand
But then quickly retreats
What they want is jus dangling there
They can reach out and receive
But self consciousness is quite unfair
And makes the awkwardness complete
The silence is almost deafening
No one can hear a thing
Jus thoughts and emotions running wild
Around, around again
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| joyce ivy (68.222.110.4) -- Sunday, December 5 2004, 09:25 am lived these moments....good poem |
| Aj (67.123.218.164) -- Monday, December 6 2004, 07:15 am Very nicely put as well accurate, good work! love to read more. |
| mental (66.153.163.194) -- Friday, December 10 2004, 02:05 am ah memories of younger years ( sigh) |
| anonymous (192.168.0.8) -- Monday, August 15 2005, 04:39 pm Just typical of me...Keep it up. Good poem! |
| nice one (98.246.18.41) -- Sunday, April 12 2009, 08:25 am thats so me dude |
| batman (198.20.32.1) -- Monday, January 4 2010, 07:15 pm ahh can i use this for my english project.. its a good example of an awkward poem. |
| Puppet (69.181.45.166) -- Wednesday, January 6 2010, 08:59 pm This is a simple poem, but is strong because of that. I like it a lot! |
| gaurav (59.177.76.224) -- Saturday, September 11 2010, 10:44 pm love it |
| pinkk (68.10.240.69) -- Thursday, October 7 2010, 02:09 am ITS amazing!!! |
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