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Suicide
8 December, 2004
Author: Mike

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Hurt and betrayal, I just want to die.
My whole life is just one big lie.
I want to escape from a world of hate.
Its time for me to take control of my fate.

But how should I do it, jump from a roof?
Or 'fall' in the river, there'd be no proof.
Should I slit my wrists, die a painful death?
Or hang myself until I have no life left?

So many ways, too many to choose
I could even take pills, die while I snooze.
In the end it won't matter much,
As long as I'm dead, who gives a f**k?

------- Author's Notes -------

Sorry about the language.. :)

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Nicole (67.136.121.12) -- Monday, February 7 2005, 04:32 am

WOW

So true!!!! On a greater note....i would care if you died...even if i dont know you!!!
Nicole
blade (168.221.27.195) -- Monday, February 14 2005, 08:02 pm

this is one of my favorites!!!!!

you are very talented!!!!!!! and i to will care if you die!!!
Raimee (80.5.40.153) -- Monday, March 7 2005, 08:31 pm

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No Mike, please just no no no. I do know you and I love you okay and just please don't cause you know how worried I get. I know it's just a poem but you know you mean the world to me. There'd be no way I'd find out either, so just please don't.. I love you forever.
LBK (84.9.36.131) -- Saturday, March 12 2005, 12:51 am

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I've felt EXACTLY the same as what this poem says. I have never told you though...I think...Raimee said everything else I wanted to say :P
puddmyster (109.170.171.215) -- Sunday, August 11 2013, 10:06 pm

my god this is how I feel

I feel like this constantly. No one ever understands my crys for help
 
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