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Zero Three
12 December, 2004
Author: 15

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A blanket of fog comes rolling in,
To secure this melonchony, empty feeling.
All days so bland and meaningless,
My demise the goal of nature's kiss.

Cannot find a mythical god in the sky,
This terrible overcast knows the limits of eyes.
For so many, the time is right now,
But I have three reasons to go on somehow.

So I'll brave it out,
I'll hide it within.
So I can spend this life and the after,
Surrounded by them.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

webster (4.250.51.24) -- Monday, December 13 2004, 01:54 am

Bleak

This poem gives off a bleak feeling of hopelessness but ends on an upbeat reason
for living.
joyce ivy (68.19.169.50) -- Monday, December 13 2004, 02:43 am

I am with Webster here

bleak yet upbeat...i like your words...
Eryemil (205.188.116.71) -- Monday, December 20 2004, 01:12 am

^.^

If I had to make myself miserable just so I could be in peace with my family; screw the family. Ok, that's a cold thing to say, but it's quite true.
 
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