My Beautiful Dream by Tammy

Last night I had a beautiful dream.
The sky was smiling down on me.
The stars twinkled, they shined so bright.
Then heaven opened with a glorious light.
There he stood right before my eyes.
He came back to me, and I began to cry.
But the tears were not of sorrow,
they were of pure joy.
Because now he was with us again...
Me, and our little boy.
Now he could be with us, a family
like we had planned.
Long walks on the beach... watching
him, and Jordan building
castles in the sand.
All the things we wanted to do...
was now finally going to come true.
Then I saw the look in his sad eyes,
he only came back to say goodbye.
So much pain filled my heart,
I knew he couldn't stay.
I gently kissed his soft sweet lips
before he turned away.
He looked back, and said: give
my son my love, tell him his daddy
is watching him closely from above.

Meridian (172.132.22.234) -- Wednesday, December 15 2004, 07:41 pm

Tam!
Hey, my sista! Isn't it good to read something from you! Your dream must've been refreshing, anytime you dreamt of something as pleasant as you've written! It's a sad thing to know, that we can't live forever you know. You, and I'm sure Jordan, would be proud to see him again!
Tu poema era fantastico! (Your poem was fantastic)
Humph! Me and my bad spanish! Take care, and I hope your day was brightened! Smiley face, Meri

J Freedom Long (68.162.246.208) -- Thursday, December 16 2004, 02:20 am

the presence of a Dad
Lovely and stirring....brought tears to my eyes thinking of my own dad who was called Billy the Fiddler..and killed in World War II when I was very about 7 years old.....will never forget his lullabies played to us on his violin at bedtime.. each time I hear violin music, I feel the spirit presence of my Dad. You might want to read my poem Angle Feathers to help sustain you knowing he is a spirit angel not away from you and Jordan.....love is eternal. Thanks for your wonderful poem, Tammy. Keep writing....you have a gift...

Tammy (66.38.6.67) -- Thursday, December 16 2004, 06:42 am

Thanks Meridian, and J.F.Long
Thank you Meridian for your wonderful, and lovely comments, I am glad to be back, so hopefully I can catch up on some of your work too.

Thanks J.F.Long for your kind, and thoughtful comments. I will be sure to read your poem Angel Feathers. Sorry about your father, you were very young as well when you lost him.

joyce ivy (68.19.178.205) -- Thursday, December 16 2004, 05:47 pm

So Heart Touching
Tammy this is a beautiful poem and a wonderful dream...so sorry for your loss..your poem touch my heart and brought tears to my eyes...very nice read...even though sad...loved it...

Tammy (66.38.58.115) -- Friday, December 17 2004, 04:30 am

Thank You Joyce
Thank you so much for your comments, they are truly touching!

Kali (10.36.1.1) -- Monday, February 14 2005, 09:46 pm

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Your poem is great though sad. I cant relate but i feel as if i was present in that dream, you have a talent for wirting keep up.

Tammy (66.38.6.193) -- Monday, February 14 2005, 10:36 pm

Thank you Kali
Thank you so much hun for your lovely comments...
I am really happy that you liked this poem!

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