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Come Back
19 December, 2004
Author: Angel On The Edge

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We only have one life
Why do people fight!
What’s most important in life
Some people loss sight.

Family can never be replaced
Some family members die
That makes me cry
But some run away and hid
Which makes me have to say…

How can someone be so thoughtless?
Don’t they want to spend time with us?
Don’t the care about us?
I thought I could trust
Someone I thought I loved
But they made a fuss
I don’t know whom to trust.

I want their love back
So cant we just make up
I know we can’t forget
But we can forgive
I want to see my family
The part of family I never see
There is a hole deep within me.

I pled one more time
I want to make you see
How important family is to me
Maybe someday you will understand
Family is irreplaceable
And that we need you to be whole
Death should be the only thing to split us
That’s something we can’t control
We only have one life
Please can we not fight.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

joyce ivy (65.12.35.192) -- Friday, January 7 2005, 05:19 am

Aimee

Amiee this is a very heart touching and sad poem...and your right death should be the only thing to seperate a family...I have a very close family...and thats the way we are...death is all that has seperated us....your poem was very well written and heartfelt...love your work here...joyce
maia connolly-hubbard (90.197.36.146) -- Tuesday, November 4 2008, 06:42 pm

great

this is a great poem to express your feelings and i feel the same way but don't know how to write it down

what a fantastic poem MAIA
 
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