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Mental Cell
28 December, 2004
Author: Fallen_Angel

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Thou shall lye
broken hearted
drowned in tears
That they longed to be forgotten
One drop second by second
year by year
while time slips threw life's fingertips
threw pain and agony alone I roam
In search of a happiness
That doesn't exist
heavy breaths
of a stale wind
that cant fill my emptiness
for I long for the savor in deaths arms
When my Shallow heart traces my thoughts
to a paradise
that a imagination leads us to in our mind
A guilty conscience will bury us into a pretend hell
Keep my broken soul locked in a mental cell
For death cannot save one from life
with the fact of existence lays in the mind

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Comments on this poem/writing:

batafish22 (64.72.57.205) -- Tuesday, December 28 2004, 09:59 pm

no title

wow
joyce ivy (68.19.169.142) -- Wednesday, December 29 2004, 02:46 pm

wow Millisa

very deep and moving poem....my soul is always locked in a mental cell within my crazy ming...great poem...love it...joyce
Mallisa (24.117.177.53) -- Thursday, December 30 2004, 02:47 am

thank you

thank you very much
 
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