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My Granparents
29 December, 2004
Author: Angel On The Edge

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Your perfect in everyway,
The things you do,
The things you say.

You guys are the best,
Better than all the rest!!!

Im glad your mine,
You’re ever so kind.

You’re the worlds greatest,
I love you so very much,
That feeling gets greater,
With every single touch.

------- Author's Notes -------

I wrote this 4 my grandparents 4 christmas.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Capricorn (82.36.129.85) -- Wednesday, December 29 2004, 03:04 am

Hi Aimee

A lovely tribute to your grandparents. I bet they're very proud of you too.
joyce ivy (68.19.169.142) -- Wednesday, December 29 2004, 02:48 pm

Beautiful Aimee

This is a heart touching poem and shows the great love you have for your grandparents...I know they loved it...I would have....great job....joyce
Meridian (172.139.202.153) -- Thursday, December 30 2004, 03:09 am

sweet

Yep, grandparents give you joy; they care so much for their grandchildren! I Thank God my grandmother is still living. Though my grandfather died when I was very young, he seemed to be a sweet man. Even if he didn't show up all the time. Great words Aimee!
Aimee . H (210.55.106.74) -- Saturday, January 1 2005, 02:44 am

Thanx guyz

hey thankyou so much for commenting on my poem!!!
its really kind of you i lyk to know what people think!!!
Tanner (172.16.3.23) -- Thursday, April 24 2008, 07:55 pm

How Sweet

It Is So Sweet I Wish I Would write Poemsd Like u
 
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