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What She Did..
30 December, 2004
Author: Danielle W

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she keeps falling from what she had
she feels lost and confused
not knowing who is true
she keeps her emotions inside
trying to hide them from everyone who cares about her
i have tried to help her
but she walks away with a sad look on her face
she made the same mistakes over and over again
thinking it wasnt a mistake;
thinking it was a answer to her problems
but when i tried to help her; she pulled away
and ran from one of the only person
who truely cared what would happen next
i thought she would talk to someone
but instead made the worse decision ever
and i never saw again
because her choice just made everyone cry instead

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Leah (204.112.169.60) -- Friday, December 31 2004, 07:30 am

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This is so sad........makes u want to take more action to help the hurting ppl around you....good writing..happy new year :)
 
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