Something's Missing by Sweet Sara

It's mid summer
And it all feels right.
The sky is clear
With waves having a great fight.
vegetation is dark green
With many colorful flowers.
Beautiful animals are seen
After the night's showers.
The sun is up today
With its warm rays so easy going.
A nice cool breeze pulling my hair away,
Making my red tube blouse have my shoulders showing.
People are enjoying this weekend
With somuch calm and ardor.
Leaving the offices they attend
To visit and relax at the shore.
Everything is perfect in this setting
But then i feel incomplete.
I feel as if something important is missing
As the water crawls up my feet.
No thinking was needed
When my heart felt as if it yelled out.
And yes indeed,
It gave a shout.
What was missing,
Or rather who?
The empyness was overwhelming,
As I instantly knew who was missing was you.

Terrie* (65.135.86.242) -- Saturday, January 1 2005, 03:02 am

that special someone is the missing link....
Sweet Sara , this is such a lovely delicate read, when you have a chance i'd like you to read one i wrote about the beach titled
"You Are"...thank you for sharing the thoughts and feelings of your heart...Happy New Year!!!!....

joyce ivy (68.19.140.83) -- Sunday, January 2 2005, 01:15 am

SWEET SARA
very beautiful..thanks for sharing...joyce

sara (216.39.188.131) -- Monday, January 17 2005, 10:54 pm

thank u
thank you all for takin ur time on sharing and yes terrie i'd love to check out that poem. in fact, im on my way to look for it.

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