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Your Heart Holds My Tears
6 January, 2005
Author: Terrie*

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you heard my tears roll down
you hear my silent cries
you felt them land in your heart
as they fell from your cheeks
while your soul embraced me from afar

a life was lost today
some one dear to my heart
I knew that time was moving fast
it seemed to have
stopped only for a second
before she was taken away

she left with a smile
and love in her heart
while we stood by her side

she left us with the hope
that a cure will be found
someday
she left this world without a sound
as she slowly slipped away

i thank you my love
for hearing my silent cry
with the one heart that we share
thank you for always being there

------- Author's Notes -------

i lost someone close to my heart to luekemia early this morning i felt the strength and embrace of the man that i love from afar

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Comments on this poem/writing:

anonymous (205.188.116.71) -- Friday, January 7 2005, 05:58 am

nice poem

really a nice poem. nice to see you were by her side to see her off to her journey. and that she was smiling, hope someone is there for me someday. very nice poem & thanks for sharing maybe there is hope for a cure?
Aimee: ) (202.89.42.21) -- Friday, January 7 2005, 06:47 am

Beautiful

love your poem very sad. hope everything is ok
Terrie* (65.148.211.254) -- Friday, January 7 2005, 07:03 am

mysterious one...your compassion runs deeper...

than any ocean, i feel the sincerity of your heart by the comment you placed..yes i too hope that a cure is meet,for every disease known and unknown.upon every birth i have witnessed i felt a renewal in my soul,after my husbands death and every death i have encountered i felt a part of me die too..when our time comes i believe our spirits join so no one will ever face the last moments alone...thank you so much, your words were very embracing..
Terrie* (65.148.211.254) -- Friday, January 7 2005, 07:10 am

Aimee, thank you lil' one..

i don't do death very well, in poetry love is my specialty everything is fine doll we knew this was coming she was very brave it was us we were the ones that were not ready to let go of her yet. thank you for your concern
joyce ivy (65.12.35.192) -- Friday, January 7 2005, 06:55 pm

Terrie

this sent chills down my spine as I read this. I am sorry for your loss .seems thats all we've had lately. my cousin buried his 21 year old son on Jan.1. he was the 10th in our family since Sept,2. your poem makes me think of all of them. but one thing I find comfort in is that they are at peace. just as your friend is now. thank you for sharing your heart again. lovely work. -joyce
Megan (205.188.116.71) -- Friday, January 7 2005, 09:49 pm

Your Heart Holds My Tears

beautiful
Terrie* (65.150.170.26) -- Saturday, January 8 2005, 01:00 am

Joyce,thanx for adjusting your day to read/comment

i am sorry to hear of your losses, please accept my sincere heartfelt condolences ..yea a % of my in-laws have been dx. w/some sort of cancer and that in itself is devastaing being in the medical field doesn't alleviate the situation that i find myself in..it has taught me to be stronger.and just be there...it has carried me through the trauma of sudden deaths when i am in a code death seems too final for most, but i found out it is only the beginning
Terrie* (65.150.170.26) -- Saturday, January 8 2005, 01:03 am

Megan, thank you soooo much...

thank you for readin'/commentin' it means soooo much to me..thanx...
 
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