vinebar

Broken
7 January, 2005
Author: Angel On The Edge

vinebar

You faced seemed to be carved by angels
I loved your golden hair
I couldn’t help but steer
I had that funny feeling
When I saw you near.

How could you hurt me so bad?
When all I did was care
I thought you were so perfect
And that you would always be there.

Love is now something that we don’t share
You can’t get it back
Even though im still here
You broke my heart
And it can’t be repaired.

vinebar

Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.211.254) -- Friday, January 7 2005, 03:09 am

Shattering...

Aimee,the heart is a very fragile organ....takes a lot for one to do the right thing to build/repair it back up......but...sometimes it can be done....great share...
joyce ivy (65.12.35.192) -- Friday, January 7 2005, 05:14 am

Aimee So Sad

thats sad...but we all get our hearts broken from time to time...but eventually they do mend....very well written poem...thanks for sharing...joyce
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

Comment Title:

Comment / Ammendment:

Please complete the recaptcha below for spam prevention:

Click here to read other Poems by Angel On The Edge

vinebar

Poetic Dreams Other's Poetic Dreams Submit a Poem New This Week Forum Home

Copyright©2017-1999 by Rebecca R. Hammack

COPYRIGHT NOTICE: All Rights Reserved.   No part of this website, including all pictures and written words,  may be reproduced or copied in any manner from this website without  permission of the original author of the work.  All poetry and pictures herein remain the sole property of the original author and/or copyright owner.  All poetry on this website has been submitted by the original author of the work. To contact any author of the work please e-mail: dreamer@dreamersreality.com  so the proper person may be notified.